A poem from this modern war

[derrickvalchar]

Ah, broken promises and empty dreams not all in life is what it seems the diamond sparkles and it gleams is nothing to history torn at seams broken bones from holding pride No man was wounded when Jesus died but you fight and you will die and Uncle Sam wont tell you Why the smell of death and burning flesh cnn will tell the rest squeeze to hard and all is lost We'll save the world at any cost god bye mom and good bye dad the prohisy is iron clad I give my life one more to fall I told them once I told themall but only friends could hear my call I am not the most devout but with you I could not live without bring your wrath and bring the pain lead the world with your reigns

[LuRose Williams]

Derrick,

That is a very deep and moving writing. I would like to encourage you to journal much more of your talents.

Love, Grandmother.